Sunday, November 20, 2022

A Bottom Song



For Bonnie who redefined the word Bottom

Sassy bottom
Testing bottom
Itchy bottom  
Scorned

Teasing bottom 
Mocking bottom 
Craving bottom 
Warned

Bratty bottom
Topping bottom
Needy bottom 
Tried

Wronged bottom
Scolded bottom
Railing bottom 
Fight

Worried bottom 
Dancing bottom 
Squirmy bottom
Knelt

Naked bottom  
Stinging bottom 
Warming bottom
Dealt

Wiggling bottom 
Blocking bottom
Kicking bottom
Struggled

Holding bottom
Smarting bottom
Reddened bottom
Doubled

Crying bottom
Begging bottom 
Sobbing bottom 
Pleads

Sorry bottom 
Softened bottom
Quiet bottom
Peace

Light bottom 
Safe bottom
Loved bottom
Floats

Hugged bottom 
Rubbed bottom
Soothed bottom
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8 comments:

  1. Hello Becca,

    What a sweet poem. I hope Bonnie comes here and reads it.
    Welcome to blogging. I hope you continue, and please consider stopping by my weekly brunch and sharing your thoughts there.

    Hugs,
    Hermione

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    1. Dear Hermione, thank you for your kind words, they mean a world to me, honestly, from the bottom of my heart (that bottom, again). I read your blog religiously, especially the Impact zone and the Library. I'm so sorry to be late to Bonnie's farewell party, will try to rectify the situation.

      Funny enough, that the first story I wrote was inspired by the controversial Outlander scene you have on your shelf. Now I feel obligated to post it here.

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  2. Great poem! I hope you enjoy blogging as much as I have/do! Welcome and enjoy!
    Warmly,
    Jean Marie

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    1. I'm so glad you liked it too. Love your blog and I visit it often. I will never be able to blog as much as you do!

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  3. Thank you, Becca. I love it!

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    1. Oh Bonnie, thank you for stopping by, I'm really honoured.

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  4. I really like how there's a story being told, step by (glorious!) step, each with it's own closing before the next step continues the story. Nicely done! elseepa

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    1. Thank you, elseepa. I see you are slowly getting through all the best parts! Jump to the next song: https://soreismore.blogspot.com/2023/01/never-in-anger-song.html I think you will like it more.

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