"Before you disappear into the bathroom, order some food, will you? And leave your phone here when you're done."
"Can I order sushi?" Izzie asks a loaded question, without looking up. And in response, Nick clears his throat. "Sorry. May I order sushi?"
"Darling, I didn't mean the grammar but the raw fish."
"Pretty please? It's completely safe! They know that it's for us. They triple check every piece that goes into our order. The last thing they need is to poison me."
"Alright, order sushi."
"Thank you! And chicken teriyaki for you?"
"Salmon teriyaki, time to live dangerously."
"Your salmon is cooked."
"I'm not a monster, Iz."
"You are not, Nicky."
"I didn't mean sushi."
"I know. Still, not a monster. Just a Big Bad Wolf."
"With his Little Red?"
"Yep! And they lived happily ever after. Eventually. For what time?"
"I beg your pardon?"
"For what time to order sushi?"
"In an hour? Will we be done in an hour?"
"Are you asking me? It's your show, Nick."
Sorry, it's super short and dialogue-only but with a lot of feelings, doubts, and hesitation, and also, moving the story forward. Isn't it just the best thing, after the spankings, of course?
Submitting last minute to Saturday Spanking Blog. Picture from Tumblr.
I do love their exchanges, though I do get confused at times with as few tags as you use. I thought it was Nick who wanted Sushi, but it seems Iz is having Sushi and Nick is having Cooked Salmon Teriyaki. I'm also not sure how Sushi and being a monster go together. Either way, I love the image of a girl in bed with The Big Bad Wolf. That's my kind of story!
ReplyDeleteSore for posting tagless dialogue, Kathryn. I made it a bit clearer:
ReplyDelete"Can I order sushi?" Izzie asks a loaded question, without looking up. And in response, Nick clears his throat. "Sorry. May I order sushi?"
Sushi contains raw fish, not advisable for pregnant women, in Nick's opinion. Which Izzie craves.